Hipster Vinyl Scratch (Redrawn)

Did this a while ago and never uploaded it. It's late and I haven't submitted anything in a while so what the heck.
This is a re-drawn version of a sketch I did almost a year ago. [link] I challenged myself to draw it in 1 hour (which I slighty passed). I'll admit, it's not my best work, but I think it'll suffice.
I know my style has changed a lot since then. Tell me what you guys think in the comments.